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January 13, 2013
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Apple
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iPhone 4S
Shutter Speed
1/15 second
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F/2.4
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4 mm
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500
Date Taken
Nov 30, 2012 7:43:47 AM -05:00
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Microsoft Windows Photo Viewer 6.1.7600.16385
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(Contains: nudity)
This is a picture of a person that I found on DA. I added the -suppose to be- wings. Clearly that's a void in the picture that I need to fix but as for the rest, I was working a long time on where on studying the shadows that somewhere a long the line I got side tracked and started another drawing. Anyway please critique and tell me what I need to work on. Thank you!
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Nitsuj237 Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this is also good. Im really drawn to the open space where the "wing" would be.

If it were me Id make it like a feathery dress piece and keep it simple. The simplicity of that next to the detail of the girl plays with the eyes and keeps it interesting.

IMO at least : )
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Mylothic Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow thank you much.  Now looking back at it I also think that the wing does add a nice simplicity to it =) 
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stipend Jul 8, 2013   General Artist
i like how the intense blacks are opposite each other with the mid tones bridging the gap :)
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Mylothic Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you =) I tried to take the boldness of the shadow and make it mesh as good as I could with the lighter tones.
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stipend Jul 9, 2013   General Artist
yw, it turned out nicely :)
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VintageWarmth Jan 15, 2013   General Artist
Lovely portrait. :)
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The-Iron-Enemy Jan 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Very nice work, I can dig it.
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DarkPrinceArmon Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice minimalism style you got.
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Mylothic Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks though it's not meant to be minimalist :confused: I was just too lazy to finish it. :doh:
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DarkPrinceArmon Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It just reminds me of the way an old female fantasy artist use to work. Olivia I believe her name was.
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